Manga, when done well, is lovely, and this was definitely done well. I loved your use of space on the page - every inch of it used, and I think it flowed so smoothly. Sometimes, stuff like that, I'm never quite sure what I'm supposed to look at next, but I didn't get lost looking at this.

I agree with the others, definitely do more of these. I'm not a big manga or anime fan, but I would absolutely read them.